Ritsuka
Ritsuka glared at the shop front.
"We really don’t have to—"
"Shut up," Ritsuka snapped. "We’re going in." He latched onto Soubi’s hand and towed him into the store and if he was holding on tighter than towing demanded, well, no one knew that but Soubi. And Soubi wasn’t actually laughing, so Ritsuka didn’t have to actually die of embarrassment.
The woman behind the counter greeted them cheerily and Ritsuka twitched a bit, hurrying Soubi past before the clerk could try to be helpful. Safely, sort of, among the shelves, he let go of Soubi and crossed his arms, trying not to look at anything. "Okay. So. What do you want?"
Soubi cleared his throat. "Well. Let me take a look around and see."
There were days Ritsuka wished he still had his ears just so he could pin them back to show how little he appreciated Soubi’s sense of humor.
Of course, if he still had his ears, he probably wouldn’t be allowed in here.
He trailed after Soubi as Soubi wandered through the shelves. He was not going to clutch the hem of his boyfriend’s coat like a freaked out little kid. He was not.
"Hmm. What about this?"
Ritsuka registered that Soubi had stopped in front of the rack of dildos, which wasn’t quite what he had expected, and let out a silent breath of relief. He’d said anything, but… And then Soubi turned around and Ritsuka’s sigh turned into a squeak.
"You… um…" Ritsuka swallowed, taking in just how big the brightly colored dildo Soubi was holding really was. "You sure?"
"If you don’t want to," Soubi started, and Ritsuka waved a hand as if to bat down the words.
"I said anything and I meant it! Just…" he took a breath. "You’re sure?"
"I’d like it," Soubi said softly.
Ritsuka nodded. "Okay." He turned for the register, Soubi close behind him. He hoped that smiley clerk didn’t say anything about this, because then he’d have to blush. And then he really would die of embarrassment.
Soubi
"Oh… oh god, Ritsuka, yes…"
Soubi sprawled, panting, over the bed and the couple of pillows that were lifting his ass up so Ritsuka could push an enormous dildo into it.
Life was very good, sometimes.
He moaned as Ritsuka pushed it in a little deeper. Ritsuka was going very slow, which Soubi had expected and didn’t object to. This was worth savoring, the ferocious stretch as slick glass forced him open. The faint ache as it held him open, sliding deeper and deeper a tiny bit at a time.
"Nnn… oh please… ahhh…"
The muscles of his legs trembled with reaction and his breath came in deep gasps. This was just as intense as he’d dreamed it might be.
"Aah, please…"
He groaned into the sheets as the dildo slid in all the way.
"Okay?" Ritsuka asked behind him, sounding a bit breathless himself.
"Wonderful," Soubi gasped. "Incredible. Please, Ritsuka, fuck me…" He moaned, hoarse, and shuddered as Ritsuka pulled the dildo back, all his muscles slack and watery in its wake.
When Ritsuka pushed it in again, a little harder this time, he could only whimper.
It was so perfect, so sweet to lie pliant under Ritsuka and have his ass worked hard until his whole body trembled, overloaded with sensation. He could barely move for it, could only make pleading sounds as Ritsuka drove the huge dildo into him over and over.
"Soubi," Ritsuka whispered.
The sound of his Sacrifice’s voice, that husky, pushed him over the edge.
"Ahh!" Soubi’s whole body shook as orgasm rocked through him and muscles stretched to their limit tried to clench. "Yes! Please, yes…"
It was like being in the heart of a fire and he was too wrung out to even twitch as Ritsuka pulled the dildo free, hesitant as he tugged against the grip of Soubi’s body. Ritsuka’s hands rubbed gently over his back.
"You sure you’re okay?" Ritsuka asked, anxious. "You’re sure I didn’t hurt you?"
Soubi smiled and flopped over on his side so he could tug Ritsuka down against him. "I’m very sure. That was perfect." He nuzzled Ritsuka’s hair and murmured. "And you?"
Color stole over Ritsuka’s cheekbones. "You’re…" His fingers traced over Soubi’s chest. "You look really amazing like that."
Soubi chuckled. "Mmm, so you like seeing me spread out under you and shaking while my ass stretches wide around something you’re fucking me with?"
"Sou-bi!" Ritsuka was still adorable when he turned red and glared. He made a small hmph and scrunched a bit further down into Soubi’s arms and muttered, "Yes."
Soubi softened in turn, the way Ritsuka always managed to make him. He kissed Ritsuka gently. "Thank you."
Ritsuka smiled, wry and sweet, and kissed him back. "Yeah, well.
"Happy Birthday, Soubi."
End
*fans self* My /goodness/. *chuckling* Soubi’s kind of a size queen.
*wicked grin* Soubi likes it intense. We figured this was the ‘intense’ Ritsuka could handle dishing out best.
*___* Fantastic. I absolutely adore this. 😀 I think there should be way more Ritsuka-does-kinky-things-to-Soubi-for-X-reason fics. ♥
*hearts* I sure think there should be more. ^_^ Glad you liked it!
Whadawhada…
EEEEHHHH!!! –flounders– Wowzees…
Intense and humourous! YEEK!
Great job!
~ Morphy
*sparkles* Thank you so much!
*___*
I think I need to go refamiliarize myself with Loveless if you’re going to write things like THIS.
(Is it warm in here?)
*hearts*
I’m not sure I’ll write much more for Loveless, though the lure of the smut is always strong. *grins* I just hurt for the poor schmucks so much I had to give them a happy ending. *pets them* With smut!
Aah, I do remember feeling distincly unsatisfied with the ending of the anime, yes. It was only the the third one I’d ever watched, and immediately after it, I was forced to watch PoT…I wasn’t really into anime at the time, so I don’t remember exceptionally well. I do remember shipping Soubi and Ritsuka like OMG, though, which is why I read this in the first place. 😀
But happy endings are the best. \o/ And with porn is even better, of course, that goes without saying. (It’s so difficult for me to write angst–I just want to wrap them up in a fuzzy blanket and give them tea and a fluffy, snuggly ending. D: Ah well…)
Heh heh. You’re lucky then. I find it TOO easy to write angst and harder to come up with something fluffy… I like ready fluffy fics, but I’m pretty much never the one writing it.
Really? I don’t even like reading angst. XD I know, I know, I’m so closeminded~ I’ve also been criticized for my rosy glasses. XD
That’s fine. I’m an angst monster. Most things I write have at least a small touch of angst to it. I’m working on my first humour, non-angsty fanfic.
Heh Heh.
I love your fics though!
*blushy* >.> Dude. This is Branch’s comments page. Isn’t it weird to fangirl me *here*? Not like I don’t appreciate it (<33 aah, thank youuuu) but REALLY.
<.<
Go on, no more idle chitchat. XD
wow, super hot … I’m glad Soubi had a good birthday
*hearts* Thank you!
He certainly deserves one. *firm nod*
Loved it – especially the way Rituska is still so shy even after he’s lost his ears! Wonderful! Thanks!
Thank you! *grins* You gotta figure, even post-ears, Ritsuka will still blush.
Loved it!!!
Not what I was expecting, but oh well. I didn’t ever think that Ritsuka could give
Shoubi such a birthday present!!
PLease continue writing a little more about this couple.
Maybe even a Soubi/Ritsuka one next time?
Anyway, thank you and loved it!!
Glad you liked it! *grins* I figure Ritsuka would be blushing like mad the whole time, but he’s such a sweetie he would want to do something Soubi really /wants/ for him.
*fans self vigorously* Love this fic. Its so nice that Soubi got such a wonderful birthday present from Ritsuka!
Thank you! I figure it’s what Soubi would like. *grins*
Gyahaha, never thought Ritsuka has guts to do anything kinky like that XD
I kinda hope he bought more toys 😉
Even though I don’t really like the idea that Ritsuka is still in elementary school, in fanfic, I could pretend that he’s some hight school boy so it’s better =p
Thank you! *giggles* Happy birthday, Soubi!
And I’m totally with you on Ritsuka needing to be older. This is set at /least/ three years post-canon.
It’s really lovely!
Would you mind terribly, if I translate this fic into Russian language? I will state everywhere that I am just a translator and you are the author of the fic. I’ll send you a link when I’m up with the translation.
Thank you once again for your wonderful work!
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! And if you want to translate it, I’d be perfectly fine with that. ^_^
ffffffffffffffffffffffff. Size queen A+. I wish I had something more intelligent to say than “hur hur” but apparently I am just a 15 year old boy like that.
*giggles* I figured Soubi would be a total size queen, all things considered.
O.O…..Wow again….O.O…
Consider writing anymore of this kind of stuff??…O.O…
Never knew Ritsuka was so perverted…Ahaa~^ – ^
But very cute~ ^ – ^
And once again, I thank you, almighty Branch-sama~ ^ – ^
Thank you! Yeah, I had a lot of fun imagining how bad Ritsuka would be blushing. *wicked grin*
Uwaah…
Naughty! >U<
LOLz…
Shizer, that was wow, just wow. I can’t think of much else to say. That was kinda hot and yet still adorably cute. My friend tells me it’s wrong to think of them in a sexual relationship because Ritsuka is so young but I always say “But you can’t help but wonder when he’s older…” and this is just, well wow!
*laughs* Yeah, I really wonder about when he’s older! Glad to hear you liked it!
Oh my! *blushes* mhm….that was…..yummy. And in my perpsective, anyone would know that Soubi is a size queen. I figured it out when we got a bit of Soubi’s past and sooner than that! Once again I say:YUMMY! You deserve a glomp. Then a hug. And then another hug followed by some freshly baked cookies. XD
*hearts* Thank you! I had so much fun with this one, and Ritsuka getting all determined and blushy. And goodness knows Soubi deserves a happy birthday.
that was the appatizer….*licks lips*. now for the main course! Hmmm, glass or wood this time around? XD XD
The first part was very sweet <3 and quite funny. I wonder though if Ritsuka honestly will mind of the things that certainly flashed his mind, while walking around there came true… I mean, he wasn’t relieved for no reason //D Sweet though that he went all through the embaressment just to buy him a present <3
Soubi’s part was hot *///* I see why Ritsuka enjoyed it after all //D But he’s so cute, it’s almost sad that he’s lost his ears. Just almost… cause kitty-ears would make him even cuter in those situations x3
Even though they’re just too cute together <3 In their own, sometimes a little weird way I guess ://D”
*leaves kudos*
*giggling* This one was fun to write. Ritsuka really is quite sweet with Soubi.