Unnoticed

Echizen escorts Sakuno and deals with a little trouble. Other sorts of trouble, he misses completely. Drama, I-3

Sakuno’s eyes were sparkling behind the light veils of her travelling hat.

Not only had Sumire-gozen said that she might go visit the local shrine, but Echizen-dono was escorting her. Sakuno suspected Sumire-gozen had had something to do with that. Normally the high-handed manner of her mother’s noble cousin alarmed her, but if Sumire-gozen approved of someone then no one else would thwart them.

Even the clan lord didn’t often go against his mother’s wishes.

And it seemed that Sumire-gozen approved of Echizen-dono and the fact that Sakuno liked him. However much the crowds out on the streets jostled around her, nothing could make Sakuno regret coming out in public today.

Even if there were an awful lot of awfully loud people…

“Don’t you know anything? The Tatsumi school holds the saya like that, so you can draw like this!”

Sakuno squeaked, starting back and treading on her own hem so that she wobbled, as a blade swished past her nose, close enough to catch on her long veils. The brightly dressed samurai demonstrating for his friends didn’t seem to notice.

“That training journey you took really taught you a lot, Sasabe-sama,” one of them exclaimed.

The one with his sword out laughed expansively. He was in the middle of the way, now. Sakuno bit her lip, wondering how she could pass.

Beside her, Echizen-dono looked around and sniffed. “You must not have journeyed very far. That isn’t the Tatsumi school’s grip.”

The gaudy samurai spun around, face red. “What?!” His sword speared out, pointing between Echizen-dono’s eyes. “What does a brat like you know about it?”

Echizen tipped his head to the side, so careless of the sharp point a bare thumb’s width from his face that Sakuno gasped. “Well, if you need a lesson…” He dropped his hand to his sword. “It’s the first finger that holds the guard. Like this.” Steel flashed and his sword struck the other aside so hard it spun out of the other samurai’s hand. Echizen-dono lifted a brow. “And your grip is too weak.”

“E-Echizen-dono…” Sakuno whispered behind her hand. That was… an awfully provoking thing to say… And then she stumbled a little as the fuming samurai pushed past her to retrieve his sword.

“I’ll give you a lesson, you little runt!” he yelled, making a lunge toward Echizen-dono.

Echizen-dono slipped back out of the way of a vicious cut. “Is that the fastest you can move?” The other samurai didn’t answer, glare fixed and furious, and Echizen-dono shrugged, left foot sliding out, sword dropping low.

“Hah! You think you can defend from below?” The angry samurai bared his teeth and swung down.

Sakuno wasn’t sure what happened next. Echizen-dono’s sword barely seemed to twitch but the other man’s strike went awry and he stumbled forward, eyes wide.

“Too slow,” Echizen-dono said, softly. There was another flash and the other man was down in the street, clutching his leg and keening through clenched teeth as blood pooled rapidly under his thigh.

Echizen-dono flicked his sword away from Sakuno with a snap of his wrist and sheathed it, and turned to look Sakuno up and down. “You didn’t get dirty. Good. Let’s get to the shrine, then.”

Sakuno hurried to his side and they walked on, leaving the commotion behind as the wounded samurai’s friends clustered around him, shouting.

“Echizen-dono… thank you,” Sakuno murmured at last, blushing.

Echizen-dono blinked at her. “For what?”

“Ah… nothing.” She tilted the edge of her hat a little lower, wondering whether Echizen-dono was just being modest or whether he really didn’t think protecting her needed comment.

Or, she admitted to herself with a silent sigh, maybe he hadn’t done it for her at all. He was a samurai, after all; she was young, but she knew how the men of her own class could be about fights and challenges. Sumire-gozen complained about it enough, even though she smiled when she did.

Perhaps she’d ask the kami to tell her which it was, and whether she had any hope of drawing the eye of someone like Echizen-dono.

They walked on with silence drifting between them.

End

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15 Comments

    1. branchandroot Post author

      *evil grin* I expect she complains about all the officers. I’m really hoping I can find room for a story that features her directly. More action and characters introduced in the next part, though, yes!

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  1. hazuki-katako

    *also pets Sakuno* Ganbatte Sakuno-hime! ;_;

    Echizen-dono flicked his sword away from Sakuno with a snap of his wrist and sheathed it, and turned to look Sakuno up and down. “You didn’t get dirty. Good. Let’s get to the shrine, then.”

    I really like this line…he got a little worried about her but I guess if Sakuno got dirty Ryoma would get in trouble. ^^;

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    1. branchandroot Post author

      Thank you! *pets the Ryouma-muse* He’s still pretty darn oblivious, poor boy, but he’s got a good heart. And Sakuno’s got determination. *grins*

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  2. lady-readwolf

    …. what does it say about me that I got giddy when I realized they’re “playing” with real swords? >.>

    What’s worse was my realization that Fuji would have a blade, too… yeah. There just aren’t enough cold showers. !__!

    And… I have to say: This scene was just so damn more satisfying with blades!!!!

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    1. branchandroot Post author

      *grins* Isn’t it so much more nice to see the villains get whacked with a sharp edge?

      And yes! I think I may have to do the match in the rain, and probably its aftermath… though, as usual, it’s the matches themselves that are hardest to write. ^_^;

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  3. forochel

    And I’m all just “XD” at Sakuno and Ryoma’s obliviousness and how Sasabe got so owned by Ryoma. Of course, action sharp pointy objects made me reeeaally happy too. It’s so much more, um, gratifying, somehow, with swords.

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  4. readerofasaph

    What everyone else said – this scene just seems to fit perfectly with swords. This is probably my favourite of the set so far – just because it has Ryoma and Sakuno (and Sasabe) all being perfectly themselves. Plus blood and sharp pointy objects.

    “Echizen-dono… thank you,” Sakuno murmured at last, blushing.

    Echizen-dono blinked at her. “For what?”

    Ahhh, young love. *pours imaginary hearts on oblivious Ryoma*

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    1. branchandroot Post author

      *laughing* Really, it’s cute how clueless Ryouma is. Sakuno has so much more of an emotional clue. Now, if they can just manage to trade–some of her clue for some of his spine.

      It’s so /satisfying/ to actually have Sasabe get slice up; I’m probably too vindictive. Oh well.

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