“That wasn’t necessary,” Tezuka told him.
Shuichirou tossed aside his towel and smiled over his shoulder. “Yes, it was.” As he turned back to his locker for fresh clothes, Tezuka’s hand wrapped around his wrist, not quite firmly enough to hurt.
“There were other ways it could have been done.” That cool deep voice was close behind him, now. Shuichirou shivered as he turned back to face his friend and captain.
“It was worth it.” Which was only the truth. The club had needed to know Tezuka was back as strong as ever. And, then, too, Shuichirou didn’t often get a chance to push Tezuka that hard on the court; receiving that much of his strength made for an exhilarating match.
The shadow of a smile said that Tezuka heard the double meaning. He shifted his grip on Shuichirou’s arm and tugged him closer.
“There are easier ways to get a demonstration from me. Ways that don’t involve stressing an injury right before major games,” Tezuka pointed out.
“No there aren’t,” Shuichirou contradicted with a chuckle. “You never show off.”
“Perhaps not in public,” Tezuka allowed. The way he stepped into Shuichirou and pressed him back against the wall, though, added the unspoken rider that they were in private, now. And Tezuka was, apparently, still just a little wound up from their match. That made two of them. Shuichirou closed his free hand in Tezuka’s shirt and pulled him in tighter.
Tezuka’s mouth found his, hard and demanding, and Shuichirou forgot the slight chill of the wall at his back. A hand slid down his stomach and shoved down the waist of his boxers, calluses scraping just faintly. Shuichirou made a harsh sound and his hips jerked into the touch; Tezuka’s grip on his hardening erection was as firm as his grip on Shuichirou’s arm. He wasn’t quite rough, but the urgency in his hands added an extra tingle to the heat flushing every inch of Shuichirou’s skin.
Distantly, Shuichirou wished there were a way to predict Tezuka a little better. Sometimes a hard game made him pensive and gentle. Sometimes, like today, it made him aggressive. Both were good, each in its own way, but it would be nice to know which was coming. Well, he could worry about that later.
Shuichirou yanked on Tezuka’s shirt. “Off,” he demanded. He couldn’t tell whether Tezuka’s slow smile was for Shuichirou’s answering urgency or for his obviously limited coherence. In any case, Tezuka shed his clothing with customary efficiency before leaning back into Shuichirou. Shuichirou moaned softly at the smooth resilience of Tezuka’s body againt his chest and legs contrasting with the smooth hardness of the wall behind him. Tezuka’s sleek muscles shifted under Shuichirou’s hands as they searched over Tezuka’s back and shoulders. They sighed together, swallowed into a kiss, as one of Tezuka’s hands smoothed down Shuichirou’s spine in turn. The other hand pressed between Shuichirou’s legs again, and his sigh broke into a louder moan.
“Tezuka,” he said, hoarsely, as strong fingers, stroking, spread heat through his stomach.
“Hmm?” Tezuka murmured, and bent his head to nip Shuichirou’s neck with sharp teeth.
“Ah! Tezuka…” Shuichirou leaned his head back against the wall, panting now. “You took me slow once already today. Hurry up.”
Tezuka laughed low in his throat at this interpretation of their match. “If you like. Turn around, then.”
Shuichirou turned, bracing his arms against the wall and resting his forehead on them while the sounds of brief rummaging came from behind him. Then Tezuka’s warmth was at his back, and Shuichirou found himself pressed full length against the wall. Tezuka’s hand closed around him again, slick this time, sliding fast and tight, even as long fingers pressed against Shuichirou’s entrance. Shuichirou gasped and his entire body bucked at the insistent sensations. Tezuka was certainly taking him at his word, he decided, slightly dazed.
Tezuka’s fingers drove into him, and Shuichirou shuddered, slumping into the wall as his body opened, clenched, relaxed again. Tezuka’s fingers worked him roughly until Shuichirou was straining against the warm press of Tezuka’s body, legs spread wide, almost clawing at the cool plaster in front of him, gasping for breath between the flickers of electric heat snapping down his nerves.
When Tezuka took his fingers away and replaced them with his cock in a long, hard thrust, the sound he made was as harsh and breathless as the sound Shuichirou made. Shuichirou smiled, teeth bared for a moment. Whether it was on the court or off, he took a certain satisfaction in making Tezuka pant and sweat. Then Tezuka thrust again and Shuichirou lost the thought on a long moan at the stretch and burn and force of it.
“Good?” Tezuka gasped, sounding as though he was speaking through his teeth.
“Yeah.” Shuichirou pulled in another breath. He almost never said things like this to Tezuka, but today it seemed appropriate. “Tezuka. Fuck me hard. Fuck me as hard as you play me.”
A deep, wordless sound answered him. Both Tezuka’s arms were around him, now, holding him, and it was a good thing as Tezuka drew his thumb over the head of Shuichirou’s erection and thrust in again. He drove Shuichirou hard up against the wall each time, drove fire up his spine higher and higher, and it didn’t take long at all before Tezuka’s powerful strokes unraveled him, just like they did on the court. Shuichirou jerked against Tezuka’s hands, almost thrashing as orgasm snatched away the tension of his muscles in a burst of heat and sharp, drenching pleasure.
Shuichirou leaned, laxly, against the support of Tezuka’s arms, grinning at Tezuka’s choked off moan as he thrust against the lingering clench of Shuichirou’s body. He was relaxing again when Tezuka followed him, rhythm breaking short, and they both finally stilled. Tezuka’s arms settled around Shuichirou more loosely, and his breath brushed the back of Shuichirou’s neck as they rested against the wall for a few moments.
“Thank you,” Tezuka murmured, at last.
“Definitely my pleasure,” Shuichirou told him, laughing a little.
Tezuka’s mouth pressed to Shuichirou’s bare shoulder. “For both.”
Shuichirou turned around, muscles twinging and complaining a little. He sighed, pleased, as Tezuka’s hands dropped to his thighs and rear, massaging the complaints away. “You know you don’t have to thank me for either.”
Tezuka looked down at him, bittersweet brown eyes lightened with calm. “Yes. I do.”
They smiled, quietly, at each other.
End
Not usually my pairing, but… guh. *fans self* Very, very nice. Thank you for sharing.
*bows* You’re most welcome, glad you enjoyed!
<3 God, I love TezuOishi, and not many people agree with it, let alone write fantastic character-driven smut about it. ^^ Very, very good.
Thank you! *grins* As Oishi said, my pleasure. I think their manga incarnations, in particular, are pretty hot together.
Purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
I have given up trying to figure out what Konomi is up to. Whatever genre tenipuri is, straight shonen certainly isn’t it.
[snickers and runs]
Tasty is good. ^_^
You are so very right. These last few issues I’m wondering if he’s trying to make up for Tarzan of the Tennis Court. I swear they all look even more tasty than usual.
I’ve missed out on this Tarzan thing, apparently, but then, I’ve not been following the raw manga–or hadn’t, until the buchou came home. ^^;
Sometimes I wonder what Konomi was thinking, and why this story couldn’t have been told at the high school level…
If I recall correctly, he started out planning it for high school, witness most of the character designs, and then changed his mind because Ryouma had to be younger. No idea why Ryouma had to be younger, but author’s priviledge…
Yeah, that was hot.
*beams* Glad you liked it, love.
I do believe this is the first time I’ve read a Tezu/Oishi pairing. You made the first read unbelievably hot and engaging!
Mmm… I hope to see more of this in the future!
Thank you!
It isn’t an entirely common pairing, but it has its following. More after this issue, I imagine. I like to play with it every now and then.
Mrrrow. Emily-san, you know how to indulge a fangirl. Mmm, ExoticTruffle!Smut.
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I should send you some of those truffles. And now I have a most insane craving for them.
Truffles are always welcome. ^_^
Oh, Emily, I’ve already said I love you!?? Because I really do. I was missing a fic (not to say a really good) with Tezuka and Oishi for soooo long.
I’ve already told you I totally love this pair and it’s a pleasure each time I see you writing with a pair I love (and you did it with them twice! You’re perfect!!).
I’d liked to had read Genius 250….I miss Tezuka so much…
*grins* You are very welcome; glad you enjoyed it!
Honestly, Tezuka’s return seems to make everyone in the manga hotter. It’s like magic…
{Folds report she’s working on into fan and begins fanning herself} Oh my!
{Realizes she just ruined her report} Oh Crap!
Ah well, it was worth it. ^_^
*wicked smile* Just the response I was going for, thank you.
Ooooh, preeetty. It’s amazing how you manage to bring across their characters so well with so little dialogue. *coughs* The smut was hot too. I didn’t entirely understand all of what was being said in Genius 250, but it seems like this story could have fit right in. If this was a different type of manga. Or if Konomi-sensei would just come out and admit that PoT is that type of manga. ^_~
*takes a bow* Thank you! I do find that Tezuka is easier to write the less I try to make him talk–strange, but there it is.
I didn’t quite get all of 250, either. ^_^; But this seemed close, based on what people who can actually read Japanese said about it, and after how hot they both looked in this issue I just couldn’t help myself.
Or if Konomi-sensei would just come out and admit that PoT is that type of manga. ^_~
*grins* It sure looks like it is, doesn’t it? It just took Konomi a while to realize that he likes us fangirls best, and should do nice things for us…
…. ghuh… LOVE! MAD RABU!
I have this soft spot for Oishi fics not involving Kikumaru (not that I don’t like Eiji it’s just that Oishi by himself is so damn fascinating).
*snugs* Me, too, actually. Manga!Oishi, especially, is a fascinating character. He deserves more than to be the stereotype of Seigaku’s Mommy.
…and he and Tezuka are hot in bed. Or up against the wall, as the case may be.
Oh definitely. Manga!Oishi is crafty and very underhanded, and so very much more than what the Stereotype make him to be. Sure he mothers quite a bit but let’s not forget that Oishi is also the type who will manipulate and lie to get the team to perform at their best. If nothing else the newest issue proves his manipulative skills. It is more a case of manipulation for the greater (or individual) good than manipulation for selfish reasons.
I LOVE Oishi *huggles*
And yes, up against the wall…. I have this thing about sex against the wall or a desk…. *bliss*
Hmm, it’s difficult for me to go from zero to Tezuka/Oishi smut unless I’m in a certain mood, but one thing that caught my attention:
“Tezuka. Fuck me hard. Fuck me as hard as you play me.”
I found myself paying more attention from this line forward. Not that I’d been skimming before or anything, but there’s always got to be this moment where the smut is doing something other than the physical, some concept or hook or idea that will keep me interested, and this was definitely it for me here. I’ve always thought that would have to be the really preoccupying desire for anyone truly interested in becoming Tezuka’s lover: having him let go with you the same way that he lets go with tennis. Because that single-minded, intense pressure is what makes him Tezuka, and it’s the thing that’s sexy about him, and it’s why he’s truest when he’s playing. So anyone who wanted him would have to want that, and it’s not necessarily a given that they would get it without asking.
But if you got it, the energy he put into tennis put into you, it would blow your mind.
Ryouma in particular, I think, would need/want this if he were a Tezuka lover–I thought about that during the Yaru arc, because that Ryouma was so well-done that he could continue to live in my head and I could converse with him afterwards. So we talked about that a little, he and I. ^_^
And this has been your random Cutter-rambling for the day.
Have I mentioned, lately, that I love you? Because I do. You’re such a gratifyingly thoughtful reader. That’s it exactly, what I was going for with this whole story. The issue in question centered so clearly around Oishi pushing Tezuka as hard as he could, on the court, hard enough to almost, almost break his composure. And at the end of the match Oishi’s engagement with and dedication to everything Tezuka is was so blindingly evident. I almost couldn’t imagine any other way to express that, besides tennis and sex–one as hard as the other.
It’s what made Atobe my first choice (well, besides Ryouma) for Tezuka’s lover, and why I couldn’t make my TezuFuji work until Fuji was serious enough to accept and desire that intensity.
*sparkles and glows at you*
oh, my. *wibbles* See, I actually love this pairing, but I have never, never seen it written well. I’ve been craving good TezuOishi smut since way back around ep 49-50 or so? When Tezuka plays Ryoma right before he leaves for Germany. Because it’s SO obvious right there how Oishi feels about Tezuka. *g* Agree most wholeheartedly with you and Cutter, too… that intensity is in fact what makes Tezuka so fascinating. Also why he goes well with Ryoma…which I have yet to find the time to read that arc, but I am much looking forward to it. *beams* I love you. ^_^ This fic is my proof–see, I’m not crazy! It does so work! hee… See me melt into a puddle of fangirl goo now… (like I don’t usually when I read your fics, but moreso. lol)
*gooooo and meltymelty*
Oh, I almost forgot… I didn’t, and don’t have time to leave proper feedback on it now, but your AS twincest, the wings one… that is sheer incandescent bliss. *nods lots* I do love them both so very much. *happy sigh of glowymeltybliss*
*grins* Every now and then, TezuOishi will pounce me. The first one was part of the Rikkai arc, actually. You are not crazy! They’re a sweet pair.
*blushes* Lucifer and Michael are twisted, is what. *sighs* I suppose that’s why I love them. Glad you liked it!
Hot Hot Hot
Hmmm…not what I was expecting at all…it was so much better.
I loved the characterisations and the fact that it came over as meaningful despite the wonderful smut.
Cheers
*laughs* Thank you! That issue highlighted so many things about the relationship between these two, I just had to write an epilogue to it, and a good match almost always inspires me to write smut. One of the things that makes these boys so fun to play with. ^_^
mmm so hot.. TezuOishi is such an unloved pairing. *sigh* nicely written 🙂
Thanks, glad you liked it!
You made my day ^-^ That’s such a nice -and hot- fic (and the fact that I worship every piece of fic and art with Tezuka and Oishi as a couple as nothing to do with it ^^;) !
Nicely written, and a nice following to Genius 250. (Even if after crying Oishi I would have expected something more luffy…)
Again, thank you for writing it ^-^
*pleased* Glad you liked it! I’m very fond of this pair–they have such a wide range of possible ways to relate to each other. Whenever a story for them bites me, it’s a fun one to write.
Well, I certainly hope you’ll write more on them in the future ^-^
Good lord … *shakes head* I’m sleepy so I can’t think straight, but mmm, nice, I thought of so many things when I read Genius 250 and I’m so glad someone wrote some of it down. (Though I wouldn’t ever have made them sex each other up … but I’ve been told often my sex radar doesn’t really work …)
*grins* Glad you liked it! 250 really was an especially rich issue… even if I couldn’t actually read the dialogue. ^_^;
Wow! That was… mmm yeah. I love TezuOishi, and there’s entirely too little of it out there at all, let alone stories this well-written.
If I may ask, where do you find the recent issues of Jump? I’m curious to see the game that led up to this. ^__^
Thank you!
If no one else puts it up, I usually grab the raws from![[livejournal.com profile]](http://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
flowright, who is a dear, wonderful person and usually posts a zip of the raw a few days after it comes out. I’m not sure if she’ll still have 250 up. *rummages in link list* These guys generally put scans up, though I’m having trouble connecting right at the moment. (http://jump.manlu.com/) And then the FET forums usually come up with a pretty good synopsis of what everyone is doing. (http://forums.golden-pair.net/viewforu
*___* Lovely! This is one of my favorite pairings – after Golden Pair and Tezuryo – and wow! *_* Hot-ness! Thank you!
*grins* Thanks! It’s good to hear you liked it.
No prob! =^.^= The world needs more TezuOishi *nodnod*
I havent actually read the story yet. Because i’m so happy that you wrote a) another Tezuka Oishi story, and b0 that it was from 250. I felt the need to say how great that was. because there is very little Tezuka Oishi, even less good Tezuka Oishi, and a lot of its in french, which I can’t read very well.
Where are those french fics?! I’m not very fluent in french either but better than nothing. *.*
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Wow. That was so.. in charecter and Everything. Nice.
Thank you! *grins* 250 really was the greatest TezuOishi fodder. I was stunned there weren’t more stories coming out right after it. I mean, it was so perfect for those two.
It really was, I am also surprised there hasn’t been more of a response. I was very happpy when I saw that you had written one after it though.
Wahh TezuOishi is my fav Tezuka-pair. I loved this. Smutty and hot. ^^v
Hope you got some more in stock.
Hope you got some more in stock.
I don’t do TezuOishi very often, and lately my writing is all over the map, so I don’t actually know. ^_^; But it’s great to hear you liked this one!
hrm… I kinda liked this. XD I’m not much of a Tezuka/Oishi fan, since I LOVE AtoZuka too much… but if ever Tezuka would deviate away from Atobe, this would be more like it. XD I haven’t read Genius 250 yet, sadly, but I will, once I get all the stuff I need to do done. ^_^ Anyway, I like the fact that they share some sort of connection, you were pretty accurate about that (It shows in the way you presented your fic) However, I have to say that the part where Oishi-kun said “Fuck me…” or something along those lines blew my brain off. XD I couldn’t even dare thing he would say that! XD But then, it’s your fic and it’s your prerogative on what to do with your characters… acter all, there WERE times that Oishi had been known to switch from mother hen to being quite demanding and authoritative at the same time. So, it’s possible. I can’t contest to that fact. ^_^
Techie stuff-wise, i’d say you did a great job in presenting it, the grammar is good, you made clear the setting and the atmosphere as well.
Great job! ^_^
Glad you liked it.
the part where Oishi-kun said “Fuck me…” or something along those lines blew my brain off
That is, of course, the difficulty of translating a word-concept like yaru. The more “literal” translation would be do it, but that phrase, in English, can’t always convey the situational intensity involved. I tend to render it differently, depending on the context. In this case, the context was fairly raw and intense, thus the cruder expression.
Oishi is a fascinating character, which is one reason I like writing from his viewpoint when he’s a central character in one of my stories. His manga incarnation, in particular, is caring and conscientious without really being gentle, and he has a remarkably ruthless manipulative streak. Issue 250 showed that, and the effect it has on the team as a whole, very well. If you like the team-interaction parts of the manga, I expect you’ll like that issue.
Oh, I see. ^_^ Your work fascinates me, so I think I would be reading more of your pieces in the near future. ^_^
Yes, Oishi IS a rather fascinating character, as opposed to what many people say about him. I totally agree with you on that one. ^_^ And I’m really excited to read the newest chapter of the TeniPuri manga! ^_^ I’m sure I will enjoy it. ^_^
it was very good. im not gonna tell all details so back off!
bye
*faintly bemused* Whatever. Glad you liked it.